Emily, Your digital story was amazing! I loved every second of it. It made me really think about my own holiday traditions, and how much I cherish them now. The best thing about your digital story is that you can tell a lot of emotion went into it, just by hearing your voice. It is a very powerful story, and I would not change a thing!
I love everything about your video. The music the pictures, I agree with Katie, I would not change a thing. We celebrated Christmas almost the same way, it was so much fun. Thanks for the memories.
Your digital story made me think about my family that I celebrated with who have passed on. One thing you might think about changing is reducing the music volume. The best thing about your digital story is that it shows how important family is and how fun traditions can be.
Purpose: 3 Dramatic Question: 6 Emotion: 6 Economy: 3 Images: 6 Audio: 6 Credits: 1 Your digital story made me think about my grandmother who past away my freshman year of college. The thing you might think about changing is the connection between your question and your answer. I was a little confused between your question and your purpose for most of the story. The question itself might have thrown me for a loop. The best thing about your digital story is how you now realize how important family it. I think everyone wishes they can go back and cherish those moments with loved ones that are no longer with us.
Your digital story made me think about my Christmas family dinner and what the true meaning is behind this AMAZING HOLIDAY!!!! I would consider adding some slides with words on it. Best Thing- I like the idea of incorporating the current season and opening with the question you did.
Your digital story made me think about my pappy that passed away this summer. This will be our first Christmas without him. I wouldn't change anything, it's perfect! The best thing about your story is the emotion that went into it!!
Your holiday experiences were much like mine so I had pleasant thoughts of my holidays growing up. I didn't see anything I would change. The best thing is how much you care of about your family.
Emily,
ReplyDeleteYour digital story was amazing! I loved every second of it. It made me really think about my own holiday traditions, and how much I cherish them now. The best thing about your digital story is that you can tell a lot of emotion went into it, just by hearing your voice. It is a very powerful story, and I would not change a thing!
I love everything about your video. The music the pictures, I agree with Katie, I would not change a thing. We celebrated Christmas almost the same way, it was so much fun. Thanks for the memories.
ReplyDeleteYour digital story made me think about my family that I celebrated with who have passed on.
ReplyDeleteOne thing you might think about changing is reducing the music volume.
The best thing about your digital story is that it shows how important family is and how fun traditions can be.
Purpose: 3
ReplyDeleteDramatic Question: 6
Emotion: 6
Economy: 3
Images: 6
Audio: 6
Credits: 1
Your digital story made me think about my grandmother who past away my freshman year of college.
The thing you might think about changing is the connection between your question and your answer. I was a little confused between your question and your purpose for most of the story. The question itself might have thrown me for a loop.
The best thing about your digital story is how you now realize how important family it. I think everyone wishes they can go back and cherish those moments with loved ones that are no longer with us.
Your digital story made me think about my Christmas family dinner and what the true meaning is behind this AMAZING HOLIDAY!!!!
ReplyDeleteI would consider adding some slides with words on it.
Best Thing- I like the idea of incorporating the current season and opening with the question you did.
Your digital story made me think about my pappy that passed away this summer. This will be our first Christmas without him. I wouldn't change anything, it's perfect! The best thing about your story is the emotion that went into it!!
ReplyDeleteYour holiday experiences were much like mine so I had pleasant thoughts of my holidays growing up. I didn't see anything I would change. The best thing is how much you care of about your family.
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