You did a wonderful job using animation to interpret the text! I liked seeing pictures of your friends too!
Looking forward to the music. Remember the music should be instrumental because lyrics will dilute the power of the words you are working to illuminate.
Your Illuminated text made me think about....my friends that live far away. You should consider changing/adding/taking out.... add sound or music. What I like best about your Illuminated Text is....you incorporated actual photos! Very cool!
Your Illuminated text made me think about my good friend in Utah who I rarely get to see but is still one of my closest confidants.
You should consider changing/adding/taking out.... When you add your music, you may want to think of something that makes people feel close, since the end message is togetherness rather than separation (represented by your road visual.)
What I like best about your Illuminated Text is the use of a straight road to illustrate the miles of separation.
Your Illuminated text made me think about.... my family in Ohio I miss.
You should consider changing/adding/taking out.... Music will add a lot (as you already said). I would also think about the first slide is on for a "long" time... What I like best about your Illuminated Text is....The way the text moved and interacted with each other. Especially the Far Apart. I also like how you positioned it in relationship to the road background.
Your Illuminated text made me think "awwww...how sweet". I have some friends I could send this to right now. You should consider perhaps speeding up the pace a bit. But, that will depend more on your music. If it's slow, I think the pace and time between slides will be ok. What I like best about your Illuminated Text is how it isn't "cluttery". It is very clean, yet creative.
Your text made me think of me and my friends going back to our separate ways after college graduation. You should consider the song "friends are friends forever" Your text is nice and organized, especially the pictures.
You did a wonderful job using animation to interpret the text! I liked seeing pictures of your friends too!
ReplyDeleteLooking forward to the music. Remember the music should be instrumental because lyrics will dilute the power of the words you are working to illuminate.
Your Illuminated text made me think about....
ReplyDeletemy friends who are out of state. It made me miss them.
You should consider changing/adding/taking out....
I would add music to your text to improve the feeling and emotion behind the words.
What I like best about your Illuminated Text is....
I like how you made this personal with adding pictures of your friends. It was really touching.
Your Illuminated text made me think about....my friends that live far away.
ReplyDeleteYou should consider changing/adding/taking out.... add sound or music.
What I like best about your Illuminated Text is....you incorporated actual photos! Very cool!
Your Illuminated text made me think about my good friend in Utah who I rarely get to see but is still one of my closest confidants.
ReplyDeleteYou should consider changing/adding/taking out.... When you add your music, you may want to think of something that makes people feel close, since the end message is togetherness rather than separation (represented by your road visual.)
What I like best about your Illuminated Text is the use of a straight road to illustrate the miles of separation.
Your Illuminated text made me think about.... my family in Ohio I miss.
ReplyDeleteYou should consider changing/adding/taking out.... Music will add a lot (as you already said). I would also think about the first slide is on for a "long" time...
What I like best about your Illuminated Text is....The way the text moved and interacted with each other. Especially the Far Apart. I also like how you positioned it in relationship to the road background.
Your Illuminated text made me think "awwww...how sweet". I have some friends I could send this to right now.
ReplyDeleteYou should consider perhaps speeding up the pace a bit. But, that will depend more on your music. If it's slow, I think the pace and time between slides will be ok.
What I like best about your Illuminated Text is how it isn't "cluttery". It is very clean, yet creative.
Your text made me think of me and my friends going back to our separate ways after college graduation.
ReplyDeleteYou should consider the song "friends are friends forever"
Your text is nice and organized, especially the pictures.